My School

安徽省濉溪县百善中学七（1）班  姜琰琰

I am a student of Baishan Middle School. My school is very big and beautiful. There are many tall trees, green grass and beautiful flowers. There is also a big playground in my school. The teaching building is new and our classrooms are very bright. Look! There are a lot of students at① the playground. Some playing② football, some are runing③, others are flying kites. What④ happy they are!

There are about 50 students in our class. We get on well with each other. We often studies⑤ and play together. At school, we learn many subjects, like Chinese, math, physics and English. We do our best to learn them well.

Our teachers are all very friendly with⑥ us. They work hard and teach us very well because they love us.

I love my school because it is just like my home. I also love my teachers.

【习作点评】

① at应改为on/in。表示“在操场上”应用on/in the playground。

② playing应改为are playing。现在进行时由“am/is/are + doing”构成，其中am/is/are 千万不可省略。

③ runing 应改为running。run是重读闭音节单词，且末尾只有一个辅音字母，变为现在分词时应先双写最后一个辅音字母，再加-ing，即running。

④ What应改为How。happy是形容词，所以应用How修饰。

⑤ studies 应改为study。主语(We)是复数，故谓语动词应用原形。

⑥ with应改为to。表示“对某人友好”应用be friendly to sb，介词用to。

【教师点评】

小作者用朴实的语言，从校园、同学、学习和老师四个方面对自己的学校进行了细腻的描写，体现出了学生们在校学习、生活的欢乐与和谐，也流露出小作者对自己学校的喜爱。

【亮点展示】

作者对现在进行时和一般现在时能够学以致用。

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