My Birthday Gifts

Hello, everyone! Please look at me. I’m a lovely and happy girl.

Several days ago, my mum gave me nice gifts for my eleventh birthday. I like the gifts very much! What are they? Do you want to know? Look! They are Fuwas.

Fuwas are mascots for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. They look like five lovely children. Their names are Beibei, Jingjing, Huanhuan, Yingying and Nini.

I like Jingjing best. Jingjing is a panda. It’s black and white. It has two big eyes and two big ears. It has a smiling face. Look！How lovely! Panda is our national treasure. I love pandas! I love Jingjing!

When the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games come, I will watch the Olympic Games on TV with my Fuwas. I think I will get a lot of fun.

浙江宁波市江东区实验小学五（1）班 金雨阳

简评：小作者用活泼清新的笔调为我们描述了她的生日礼物“福娃”。文章条理清晰，用词恰当，准确地运用了一般过去时和一般现在时。尤其是第二段的描述，让人感觉到好像就是在跟一个可爱的小女孩进行面对面的交谈。

（评荐老师 郝芸莱）

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