My Birthday Party

It was my birthday yesterday. I held a wonderful birthday party in the evening.

At seven o’clock, I took out my birthday cake. My family, my good friends and I stood around the cake with twelve candles on it. We were very happy and they began to sing the “Happy Birthday” song. After the song, I silently made a wish. My family and friends looked at me happily when I blew out the candles.

After that, we ate the birthday cake and the delicious food while some of my good friends were dancing. A moment later, all of us began to sing and dance together. We had a great evening!

That was on May 12th, 2008. I will never forget my wonderful birthday party.

河南内乡县夏馆镇宝天曼中心小学六年级 何芳草

简评：小作者用过去时态描述了自己的生日聚会。习作虽然没有华丽的词句，但是语句通顺，行文流畅，真实地表达了小作者对生活的热爱。

（评荐老师  吴明钦）

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